chore: release v1.48.0

- chunk.ts: add --output-dir option so chunks write to output directory instead of source directory
- Refined workflow: split Review into Critical Review + Revision (5→6 steps)
- Add Europeanized language diagnosis for CJK targets

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>

.claude-plugin/marketplace.json

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   },
   "metadata": {
     "description": "Skills shared by Baoyu for improving daily work efficiency",
-    "version": "1.47.0"
+    "version": "1.48.0"
   },
   "plugins": [
     {

CHANGELOG.md

@@ -2,6 +2,12 @@
 
 English | [中文](./CHANGELOG.zh.md)
 
+## 1.48.0 - 2026-03-05
+
+### Features
+- `baoyu-translate`: add `--output-dir` option to chunk.ts — chunks now write to the translation output directory instead of the source file directory
+- `baoyu-translate`: improve refined workflow — split Review into Critical Review + Revision (5→6 steps), add Europeanized language diagnosis for CJK targets
+
 ## 1.47.0 - 2026-03-05
 
 ### Features

CHANGELOG.zh.md

@@ -2,6 +2,12 @@
 
 [English](./CHANGELOG.md) | 中文
 
+## 1.48.0 - 2026-03-05
+
+### 新功能
+- `baoyu-translate`：为 chunk.ts 新增 `--output-dir` 选项——分块文件现在写入翻译输出目录而非源文件目录
+- `baoyu-translate`：优化精翻工作流——将审校拆分为批判性审查 + 修订（5→6 步），新增中日韩目标语言的欧化表达诊断
+
 ## 1.47.0 - 2026-03-05
 
 ### 新功能

skills/baoyu-translate/SKILL.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Scripts in `scripts/` subdirectory. `${SKILL_DIR}` = this SKILL.md's directory p
 
 | Script | Purpose |
 |--------|---------|
-| `scripts/chunk.ts` | Split markdown into chunks by AST blocks (sections, headings, paragraphs), with line/word fallback for oversized blocks |
+| `scripts/chunk.ts` | Split markdown into chunks by AST blocks (sections, headings, paragraphs), with line/word fallback for oversized blocks. Use `--output-dir <dir>` to write chunks into `<dir>/chunks/` instead of `<source-dir>/chunks/` |
 
 ## Preferences (EXTEND.md)
 
@@ -154,7 +154,8 @@ All intermediate and final files go into this directory:
 | `01-analysis.md` | Normal, Refined | Content analysis (domain, tone, terminology) |
 | `02-prompt.md` | Normal, Refined | Assembled translation prompt (used by subagent or inline) |
 | `03-draft.md` | Refined | Initial draft before review |
-| `04-review.md` | Refined | Reviewed version with fixes |
+| `04-critique.md` | Refined | Critical review findings (diagnosis only, no rewriting) |
+| `05-revision.md` | Refined | Revised translation based on critique |
 | `chunks/` | Chunked | Source chunks + translated chunks |
 | `chunks/chunk-01.md` | Chunked | Source chunk |
 | `chunks/chunk-01-draft.md` | Chunked | Translated chunk |
@@ -178,7 +179,7 @@ Before translating chunks:
 
 1. **Extract terminology**: Scan entire document for proper nouns, technical terms, recurring phrases
 2. **Build session glossary**: Merge extracted terms with loaded glossaries, establish consistent translations
-3. **Split into chunks**: Use `${BUN_X} ${SKILL_DIR}/scripts/chunk.ts <file> [--max-words <chunk_max_words>]`
+3. **Split into chunks**: Use `${BUN_X} ${SKILL_DIR}/scripts/chunk.ts <file> [--max-words <chunk_max_words>] [--output-dir <output-dir>]`
    - Parses markdown AST (headings, paragraphs, lists, code blocks, tables, etc.)
    - Splits at markdown block boundaries to preserve structure
    - If a single block exceeds the threshold, falls back to line splitting, then word splitting
@@ -194,7 +195,7 @@ Before translating chunks:
 6. **Merge**: Once all subagents complete, combine translated chunks in order, prepend frontmatter if present → save as `03-draft.md` (refined) or `translation.md` (normal)
 7. All intermediate files (source chunks + translated chunks) are preserved in `chunks/`
 
-**After chunked draft is merged**, return control to main agent for review and polish (Step 4).
+**After chunked draft is merged**, return control to main agent for critical review, revision, and polish (Step 4).
 
 ### Step 4: Translate & Refine
 
@@ -219,20 +220,21 @@ Translate directly → save to `translation.md`.
 
 After completion, prompt user: "Translation saved. To further review and polish, reply **继续润色** or **refine**."
 
-If user continues, proceed with review → polish (same as refined mode Steps 3-4 below), saving `03-draft.md` (rename current `translation.md`), `04-review.md`, and updated `translation.md`.
+If user continues, proceed with critical review → revision → polish (same as refined mode Steps 4-6 below), saving `03-draft.md` (rename current `translation.md`), `04-critique.md`, `05-revision.md`, and updated `translation.md`.
 
 #### Refined Mode
 
 Full workflow for publication quality. See [references/refined-workflow.md](references/refined-workflow.md) for detailed guidelines per step.
 
-The subagent (if used in Step 3.1) only handles the initial draft. All subsequent steps are handled by the main agent, which may delegate to subagents at its discretion.
+The subagent (if used in Step 3.1) only handles the initial draft. All subsequent steps (critical review, revision, polish) are handled by the main agent, which may delegate to subagents at its discretion.
 
 Steps and saved files (all in output directory):
 1. **Analyze** → `01-analysis.md` (domain, tone, terminology, reader comprehension challenges)
 2. **Assemble prompt** → `02-prompt.md` (translation instructions with inlined context)
 3. **Draft** → `03-draft.md` (initial translation with translator's notes; from subagent if chunked)
-4. **Review** → `04-review.md` (accuracy, naturalness, terminology fixes)
+4. **Critical review** → `04-critique.md` (diagnosis only: accuracy, Europeanized language, strategy execution, expression issues)
-5. **Polish** → `translation.md` (final publication-quality translation)
+5. **Revision** → `05-revision.md` (apply all critique findings to produce revised translation)
+6. **Polish** → `translation.md` (final publication-quality translation)
 
 Each step reads the previous step's file and builds on it.
 

skills/baoyu-translate/references/refined-workflow.md

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ This file provides detailed guidelines for each workflow step. Steps are shared
 
 - **Quick**: Translate only (no steps from this file)
 - **Normal**: Step 1 (Analysis) → Translate
-- **Refined**: Step 1 (Analysis) → Step 2 (Draft) → Step 3 (Review) → Step 4 (Polish)
+- **Refined**: Step 1 (Analysis) → Step 2 (Draft) → Step 3 (Review) → Step 4 (Revision) → Step 5 (Polish)
-- **Normal → Upgrade**: After normal mode, user can continue with Step 3 → Step 4
+- **Normal → Upgrade**: After normal mode, user can continue with Step 3 → Step 4 → Step 5
 
 All intermediate results are saved as files in the output directory.
 
@@ -121,54 +121,109 @@ Translate the full content following `02-prompt.md`:
 - Add translator's notes for comprehension challenges identified in Step 1: use parentheses with a plain-language explanation, e.g., `译文（English original，通俗解释）`
 - Only annotate where genuinely needed — do not over-explain obvious terms
 
-## Step 4: Review
+## Step 4: Critical Review
 
-The main agent reviews the draft. Save reviewed version to `04-review.md`.
+The main agent critically reviews the draft against the source. Save review findings to `04-critique.md`. This step produces **diagnosis only** — no rewriting yet.
 
-Systematically review against these criteria:
+### 4.1 Accuracy & Completeness
-
+- Compare each paragraph against the original, sentence by sentence
-### Accuracy Check
-- Compare each paragraph against the original
 - Verify all facts, numbers, dates, and proper nouns
-- Ensure no content was accidentally added, removed, or altered
+- Flag any content accidentally added, removed, or altered
 - Check that technical terms match glossary consistently throughout
+- Verify no paragraphs or sections were skipped
 
-### Naturalness Check
+### 4.2 Europeanized Language Diagnosis (for CJK targets)
-- Read the translation as if it were original content (not a translation)
+- **Unnecessary connectives**: Overuse of 因此/然而/此外/另外 where context already implies the relationship
-- Flag sentences that sound like "translationese" — awkward word order, calques, unnatural phrasing
+- **Passive voice abuse**: Excessive 被/由/受到 where active voice is more natural
-- Check paragraph transitions and logical flow
+- **Noun pile-up**: Long modifier chains that should be broken into shorter clauses
-- Verify sentence length feels natural for target language
+- **Cleft sentences**: Unnatural "是...的" structures calqued from English "It is...that"
+- **Over-nominalization**: Abstract nouns where verbs or adjectives would be more natural (e.g., "进行了讨论" → "讨论了")
+- **Awkward pronouns**: Overuse of 他/她/它/我们/你 where they can be omitted
 
-### Terminology Consistency
+### 4.3 Strategy Execution
-- Verify each glossary term is translated the same way throughout
+- Were the translation strategies from `02-prompt.md` actually followed?
-- Check proper nouns are handled consistently (transliterated vs. kept in original)
+- Did the translator apply the tone and register identified in analysis?
-- Verify annotations appear on first occurrence only
+- Were comprehension challenges from `01-analysis.md` addressed with appropriate notes?
+- Were glossary terms used consistently?
 
-### Cultural Adaptation & Translator's Notes
+### 4.4 Expression & Logic
-- Are cultural references explained where needed?
+- Flag sentences that read like "translationese" — unnatural word order, calques, stiff phrasing
+- Check logical flow between sentences and paragraphs
+- Identify where sentence restructuring would improve readability
+- Note where the target language idiom was missed (e.g., English metaphor translated literally instead of finding a target-language equivalent)
+
+### 4.5 Translator's Notes Quality
+- Are notes accurate, concise, and genuinely helpful?
+- Identify missed comprehension challenges that need notes
+- Flag over-annotations on terms obvious to the target audience
+- Check that cultural references are explained where needed
+
+### 4.6 Cultural Adaptation
 - Do metaphors and idioms work in the target language?
 - Are any references potentially confusing or offensive in the target culture?
-- Check translator's notes: are they accurate, concise, and genuinely helpful?
+- Could any passage be misinterpreted due to cultural context differences?
-- Identify any missed comprehension challenges that should have notes
-- Remove over-annotations on terms that are obvious to the target audience
 
-## Step 5: Polish
+**Save `04-critique.md`** with:
+```
+## Accuracy & Completeness
+- [issue]: [location] — [description]
+- ...
+
+## Europeanized Language Issues
+- [issue type]: [example from draft] → [suggested fix]
+- ...
+
+## Strategy Execution
+- [strategy]: [followed/missed] — [details]
+- ...
+
+## Expression & Logic
+- [location]: [problem] → [suggestion]
+- ...
+
+## Translator's Notes
+- [add/remove/revise]: [term] — [reason]
+- ...
+
+## Cultural Adaptation
+- [issue]: [description] — [suggestion]
+- ...
+
+## Summary
+[Overall assessment: X critical issues, Y improvements, Z minor suggestions]
+```
+
+## Step 5: Revision
+
+Apply all findings from `04-critique.md` to produce a revised translation. Save to `05-revision.md`.
+
+The revision reads `03-draft.md` (the original draft) and `04-critique.md` (the review findings), and may also refer back to the source text and `01-analysis.md`:
+
+- Fix all accuracy issues identified in the critique
+- Rewrite Europeanized expressions into natural target-language patterns
+- Apply missed translation strategies
+- Restructure stiff or awkward sentences for fluency
+- Add, remove, or revise translator's notes per critique recommendations
+- Improve transitions between paragraphs
+- Adapt cultural references as suggested
+
+## Step 6: Polish
 
 Save final version to `translation.md`.
 
-Final pass addressing all issues from the review:
+Final pass on `05-revision.md` for publication quality:
 
-- Fix all accuracy issues found in review
+- Read the entire translation as a standalone piece — does it flow as native content?
-- Rewrite unnatural sentences for fluency
+- Smooth any remaining rough transitions between paragraphs
-- Improve transitions between paragraphs
+- Ensure the narrative voice is consistent throughout
-- Ensure the translation reads as engaging, native-quality content
-- Verify formatting is preserved correctly
 - For storytelling-style content: ensure the narrative flow draws readers in
-- Final consistency check on terminology
+- Final consistency check on terminology across the full text
+- Verify formatting is preserved correctly (headings, bold, links, code blocks)
+- Remove any remaining traces of translationese
 
 ## Subagent Responsibility
 
-Each subagent (one per chunk) is responsible **only** for producing the initial draft of its chunk (Step 3). The main agent assembles the shared prompt (Step 2), spawns all subagents in parallel, then takes over for review (Step 4) and polish (Step 5). The main agent may delegate review or polish to subagents at its own discretion.
+Each subagent (one per chunk) is responsible **only** for producing the initial draft of its chunk (Step 3). The main agent assembles the shared prompt (Step 2), spawns all subagents in parallel, then takes over for critical review (Step 4), revision (Step 5), and polish (Step 6). The main agent may delegate revision or polish to subagents at its own discretion.
 
 ## Chunked Refined Translation
 
@@ -178,8 +233,9 @@ When content exceeds the chunk threshold (see Defaults in SKILL.md) and uses ref
 2. Main agent assembles translation prompt → `02-prompt.md`
 3. Split into chunks → `chunks/`
 4. Spawn one subagent per chunk in parallel (each reads `02-prompt.md` for shared context) → merge all results into `03-draft.md`
-5. Main agent reviews the merged draft → `04-review.md`
+5. Main agent critically reviews the merged draft → `04-critique.md`
-6. Main agent polishes → `translation.md`
+6. Main agent revises based on critique → `05-revision.md`
+7. Main agent polishes → `translation.md`
 7. Final cross-chunk consistency check:
    - Check terminology consistency across chunk boundaries
    - Verify narrative flow between chunks

skills/baoyu-translate/scripts/chunk.ts

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@ import type { Root, Content } from "mdast"
 const args = process.argv.slice(2)
 const file = args.find(a => !a.startsWith("--"))
 const maxWords = parseInt(args[args.indexOf("--max-words") + 1] || "5000")
+const outputDir = args.indexOf("--output-dir") !== -1 ? args[args.indexOf("--output-dir") + 1] : ""
 
 if (!file) {
   console.error("Usage: chunk.ts <file> [--max-words 5000]")
@@ -114,7 +115,7 @@ for (const b of blocks) {
 }
 if (cur.length > 0) chunks.push({ blocks: cur, words: curWords })
 
-const dir = join(dirname(file), "chunks")
+const dir = outputDir ? join(outputDir, "chunks") : join(dirname(file), "chunks")
 mkdirSync(dir, { recursive: true })
 
 chunks.forEach((chunk, i) => {